I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Malo leiei Zion This is Sione from Rm2, I really love that you edit the paper with words, You should change your title because it doesn't make sense, But you know it's all right, Thank you for sharing your good work Zion.
Talofa Sione I really liked how you commented on my blog, and I really liked how you said how you like my work, Also thank you for making me knowing that the title doesn't make sense, So I hope you have a good day Sione! Fa'a!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Malo leiei Zion
ReplyDeleteThis is Sione from Rm2,
I really love that you edit the paper with words,
You should change your title because it doesn't make sense,
But you know it's all right,
Thank you for sharing your good work Zion.
Talofa Sione
DeleteI really liked how you commented on my blog,
and I really liked how you said how you like my work,
Also thank you for making me knowing that the title doesn't make sense,
So I hope you have a good day Sione!
Fa'a!
kia ora zion i like that you love your mum and dad and that's so cute and i like what you put smiley face on it to have a good day.
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