My story is called Superhero story.This my story that my teacher told us to do on the weekend and I finished it now I am letting you guys see it.
I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
My story is called Superhero story.This my story that my teacher told us to do on the weekend and I finished it now I am letting you guys see it.
Hi Zion!
ReplyDeleteKa pai Zion, great story! I like the way you have used conversation between your characters in your story. How did the Super heros feel after the defeated the zombies?
Sarah